Wednesday, 29 June 2016

leone Paul Martin Visit

Paul Martin Visit!IMG_0508.jpg
WALT: group ideas into paragraphs.
WALT: Write a recount.

Paragraph 1   
Introduction: What, When, Where Who                 
Only 2 sentences:

It was on cold rainy wednesday it was at pt england school he was a man that can draw a kiwi he came to draw with us
Paragraph 2    
What happened                  
Only 2 sentences:

Paul Martin showed us his new book it is called gory the kiwi he was on his board on the water  

Paragraph 3    
Conclusion: What was your favourite part?              
Only 1 sentences:

My  favourite part was when he showed his book to us

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