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Friday 24 February 2017

The bran new bike track

The whole school had to go on the bottom field we had to sing a song to other people like variety because they gave us the 50 bikes and they gave us over 100, 00$ some kids were the first ones to ride on the bikes and the track we all wanted a turn on the bikes because it looked fun 2 people in each class that had to ride the bikes Screenshot 2017-02-24 at 10.55.34 AM.png

Tuesday 14 February 2017

leone Writing a recount

Fluffy Bunny - writing a recount


Introduction


Hook


Pulls people into your story! Makes the reader want to keep reading.

Start with a question or something very interesting.


Orientation



Tell the reader what your story is going to be about.

Who, what, when, where

Include who, what, when, where in your orientation



Question/something interesting
Do you do chubby bunny challenge at school and the home?
Complex sentence - what is your story going to be about?

My Teacher miss scanlin made 4 people put marshmallow is there mouth and someone had to wear the bunny suite because they lost.


Simple sentence to finish introduction


Do you do chubby bunny challenge at school and at home?

My Teacher miss scanlin made 4 people put marshall is there mouth and someone had to wear the bunny suite because they lost?

On friday Miss Scanlin picked 4 people to do fluffy bunny challenge 3 people lost 1 boy won and kurtas ha to wear a pink bunny suit for 10 mins we were taking photos of him  and we were laughing kurtas said is taste like coffee