Wednesday, 21 September 2016

leone Writing - Narrative September 2016

Once upon time There was people kayaking down a lake when they were talking something went bang on to one of their kayak the boat that  flipped over she was swimming to get to her boat this guy flipped her boat back over the right way when she got in her kayak there was a bit more water in there she was soaking wet the Crocodile was going to bite her but the crocodile was to slow the girl was too fast at swimming.

They were trying to go too land but it was way too far when they were nely there there was a big waterfall they were going to sink but they went around it there were heaps of Crocodile around them they were all scared but the big people were not scared they were trying to scry them away but they didn't go away then they had to turn around.

They were so hungry and thirsty stopped to had a snack when they were living when they hopped into their kayak all of them nely fall out when they finally got to land they had a sleep when they woke up there kayak were floating away they all had to swim to their kayak they had push it to land why the kids were holding their own boats when they were going home it was raining and the kids were getting wet when they got home they had a shower and go to sleep they said they would not go kayaking again because they got home too late there was a leader at the front of them    

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