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Paul Martin Visit!

WALT: group ideas into paragraphs.

WALT: Write a recount.

Paragraph 1   

Introduction: What, When, Where Who                 
Only 2 sentences:

It was on cold rainy wednesday it was at pt england school he was a man that can draw a kiwi he came to draw with us

      

Paragraph 2    

What happened                  

Only 2 sentences:

Paul Martin showed us his new book it is called gory the kiwi he was on his board on the water

Paragraph 3    

Conclusion: What was your favourite part?              

Only 1 sentences:

My  favourite part was when he showed his book to us