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Friday, 19 February 2016

boy jack


Screenshot 2016-02-19 at 10.08.48 AM.pngNarrative Writing
WALT: understand the features of narrative writing.


PLAN:
Character (who)
boy jack
Setting (where)
at a beach
Problem (plot)
missing something
Resolution (how problem is fixed)
monster help find


WRITE:
Introduction - Characters & setting. (Who? when? where?)


2 years ago there was a boy called jack he was really creepy he had a white mask on his face he had sharp teeth




Problem - What went wrong?

When it was a hot day he went to the beach he went far as he could not go back to his car until 5 weeks he was out of the beach                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                           



Resolution - How was the problem fixed? Can be sad or happy.

When a boy jack had a swim he went too far he couldn't touch the ground he drowned in the water he went all the way to the shrakes he nearly died but he survived case a person was driving a boat he saw a person drowning in the water