Number 28

Number 28

Prisoner number 28 was built in his father's garage. He was built from steel and bolts found on the side of the road. But prisoner number 28 wasn’t always a prisoner he was a good boy. He did everything his father demanded and never disrespected him. He never said no and never did anything to harm anyone. Until one day when he woke up and felt a bit… broken his father checked him out to see what was wrong turns out number 28 was missing 28 bolts. His father always knew what to do till this day and that’s when number 28 became a prisoner. No one really knew what happened to him he went off and started to hurt his father which a lot of other men nearby heard about and was very angry at him for it. But couldn’t blame number 28. Number 28 went missing for almost 90 years. His father showed other family members photos of number 28 when he was a little robot and he tried to make him an even bigger robot. People always asked him, “What did happen to him?” but his father just stuck his shoulders and said, “Honestly I don’t know”. Number 28’s father put the number 28 on his hand till they meet again and that’s how he got his number 28. For about 90 years passed there were rumors going around say, “Prisoner number 28 is back!!” everyone has heard about it and everyone was so happy to see him about well most were others didn’t want him back well the reset didn’t know what was going on. “He’s back he’s back!!” I was awoken by the loud noise of people screaming and running around. I got up and looked out the window, “Oh what?! Is that a car?!” I looked out the window and saw a car fly right pass, “My head my beautiful head I would've died” I got dressed still in shock on what happened. I didn’t know I was almost about to get a car to the head this morning. As I was walking down the road to the shops to buy milk I saw number 28 and said “Goodmorning number 28… (Walking off) Wait” I slowly turned around. “Number 28 it’s been so long where have you been?” “Where have I been? Where have I been?! My father had locked me up in a secret basement and I thought you all were in this?! he locked me up and put me to rest for years I have been asleep and I have finally woke up and now I am looking for him” “Oh well I’m sorry 28 but your father has passed” “Passed what? The red light?” “Why does everything must be a joke your father died 28 dead I tell you dead!!” Number 28 wasn’t very happy on the tone of my voice and went off again. He flipped cars and through them everywhere I knew he was the want that through the car to my face but I didn’t want him to get mad at me it wasn’t my time to go. Prisoner number 28 was finished on throwing cars but we still mad on how his father left him to die in a basement and didn’t have time to go and say his last goodbyes. Number 28 thought he didn’t belong in the world and thought he should go where his father is right now but I didn’t want that to happen I wanted him to go on with his life and what he wants to be and what he can be good at. He was so big and strong I told him to be a builder and lift up the heavier things he could be a monster mission. So he did that I signed him up and he got the job! So now Bulider 28 builds and lifts heavy things people cannot.

Cross Country

there were a lot of people and there were people from a different school in our race. Also they were in the top 5 but one person from our school that came 1st place. And the other people from our school came top 20.

Before the race started the house captains had to say there chances. But there were 4 house colours Yellow,Blue,Green, and Red but the best house color is yellow because they have the fastest people in that house colour. And also the year 7 & 8 had to do 3kms because we are the oldest and the fittest people in the school.

During the race people were getting tired and tired but we still tried our best and we kept going on and on. But we stopped so we can get a rest then after we had our rest we ran to the finish line. then after the race we had to get a water bottle from a table then we drank it and then we had to wash our feet because it was dirty. 

Informational Writing

Leone W1W

On the first week of school we had to do Writing a Narrative and I talked about Goldilocks and the Three bears if we finished that we were writing about our School Holidays.

What makes a good leader.

Have you ever dreamed to be a leader that you would pass on the ability to a different person? Well to become a leader you have to be brave, show others what to do and help others.

First, To be a leader you have to brave enough to go in the dark by yourself and with other people. And if it is dark and somebody is hurt and you hear them you can go help them to be a good leader and to be brave.

Second, a good leader has to be a role model. A leader has to be good at doing stuff properly and you brave to go where other people don't want to go you have to go by yourself and go back where the people are safe and go back and say that it is good to go.

Third, a good leader has to help others to reach their goals like the NRL  Sydney Roosters captain Jake Friend and their other captain Boyd Cordner. The Roosters just wanted to win the NRL world championship. Jake  Friend helped his team by setting up the tries and there dropkicks.

So to become a Good Leader you have to be. Brave,Show other people what to do and,Helping other people what to do,

Leone Writing - Show Don't Tell

This week and last week we were writing about show dont tell.

Yohan how do you feel running the 200m race? Yohan, I feel good that i came second in the 200m race.

Was it hard for you to run? Yohan, It was a little hard and easy.

Were you confident at the start of the race? Yohan,
Yes I was confident.

leone Year 6 Camp recount