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leone Writing Test Prac - Into the cave

Once upon a time there were 3 people going on a trip down a cave. They thought there were gold but they had to look nearly every wear in the cave they have to look under the dust if there is gold.

They found nearly found heaps of gold they heard a noiz they said that was nothing and they were still finding gold they heard it again they were so scared they didn't had a way out there light was nearly running out of battery one of them said I have spare battery he put it in the light it was more brighter he said thanks when they were hungry they had some food in there bag.

They thought that they have left it at home but they did not they said someone must of eaten it but no one has they saw something it was a ghost they weren't scared but one of them were the guy that was scared he was hiding behind the brave guy they had a weapon to kill the ghost the ghost was trying to make friends with them but they said no and the ghost said i'll find a way out for you guys and they said yes please and when they got out of the dark and hot cave.

They said there is the gold when they looked inside it there were a little gold coins like they get $20$ each because there were $60$ in the big heavy gold box.               

leone test writing the little boat

One day 2 Brother were going for a trip on that day they were far out they were scared that they were going to drown there was strong wind and storm`s coming so they were sleeping and the storm was coming and the strong wind so there boat flipped over they had lifejacket on so they don't drown when there bubble gum was sinking one of them swam down to get it he got it and he ate the whole thing and he spat it in his hand and he put it on the hole and 2 of the Brother pushed the boat but it didn't work so they tried it again it still didn't work so they tried it again.



It worked so when they got in they were soaking wet they had  towels but they were wet but not there t-shirt and pants because they were in a heavy bag but they have lost the key for it but they found something in the boat it was so strong it can break the lock open when they opened they were so happy it was open so they said there was the key it was broke in half.



They said it was funny because when they opened the bag and when they touched the key it just broke and they said hahahah and they were safe when they were going home and they were talking the way home.

leone Writing - Narrative September 2016

Once upon time There was people kayaking down a lake when they were talking something went bang on to one of their kayak the boat that  flipped over she was swimming to get to her boat this guy flipped her boat back over the right way when she got in her kayak there was a bit more water in there she was soaking wet the Crocodile was going to bite her but the crocodile was to slow the girl was too fast at swimming.

They were trying to go too land but it was way too far when they were nely there there was a big waterfall they were going to sink but they went around it there were heaps of Crocodile around them they were all scared but the big people were not scared they were trying to scry them away but they didn't go away then they had to turn around.

They were so hungry and thirsty stopped to had a snack when they were living when they hopped into their kayak all of them nely fall out when they finally got to land they had a sleep when they woke up there kayak were floating away they all had to swim to their kayak they had push it to land why the kids were holding their own boats when they were going home it was raining and the kids were getting wet when they got home they had a shower and go to sleep they said they would not go kayaking again because they got home too late there was a leader at the front of them    

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